T 2. ESCRITURA CREATIVA - CÓMO ESCRIBIR UNA REDACCIÓN (ESO- BACHILLERATO)

MUSIC:  ALAN SILVESTRI - Forrest Gump (Soundtrack)

   ¿Eres una de esas personas que tiene dificultades a la hora de elaborar redacciones porque "no se le ocurre nada que escribir?

   Lee la siguiente redacción inicial en la que se describe una clase y su versión ampliada. 

   La primera es un esbozo, poco más que un telegrama.

   La segunda, en cambio, demuestra creatividad. Está escrita con las frases de la primera, pero se le han añadido toques de observación e imaginación. Solamente tienes que observar el mundo que te rodea y describir con detalles lo que ves.

   Es escritura creativa y lo puede lograr cualquiera, con ESFUERZO, OBSERVACIÓN y DETALLISMO.

REDACCIÓN INICIAL:   Description of the classroom

Classroom 106 is situated on the ground floor of the building.

It is painted in yellow.

There are two blackboards and thirty desks for the pupils. 

There are two radiators too.

The windows are situated on the right wall of the classroom.

The teacher’s table is at the front of the classroom.

  

REDACCIÓN AMPLIADA:   Description of the classroom

Classroom 106, which is the same size as the rest of the classrooms, is situated on the ground floor of the building.

It is painted in yellow. There are two different varieties of yellow.

The entrance door is at the back of the classroom and there is another door at the front which connects classrooms 106 and 108.

There are two green blackboards which are at the front of the class, where the teachers write the explanations and the exercises and the pupils correct them every day.  

There are thirty desks, which are made of wood and iron, for the pupils.  There are two radiators on the right wall of the class, under the windows. You can see the garden of the high school through those windows.

The teacher’s table is at the front of the classroom, next to the front window. The pupils sit in front of him, in rows, facing the blackboards.

At the back, there is also a bulletin-board where people can read information about the high school, tests, meetings and many other different activities.